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Post by motoko on Jun 15, 2006 3:31:58 GMT -5
My Best friend&Sister made me do it..okay...so please PM me comments.or just talk to me in the chat box sbout what you think...okay...Thanks.. And each PM I get..I'll put a new chapter...okay..
Prologue
"I want you to have this Motoko..It's name is Kouyuu..it means love and friendship,"A boy said handing her a kitten. "I..,"Motoko started. "Just promise you want forget us,"The boy said. He hugged his best friend. "I don't wanna go,"Motoko said crying. "Motoko..here's one more thing,"The boy said handing her the alchemy book,"It's yours." Motoko hugged the boy. "I'll never forget you...we'll meet again...right,"She said. The boy said,"Yeah..I promise.."
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Post by motoko on Jun 15, 2006 3:32:21 GMT -5
Chapter 1-A twist of Fate
Sami said,"Motoko why don't have a boyfriend yet? You are nice,smart,beautiful any guy's dream girl. "She stopped and looked at Motoko. Mina whispered to Sami,"You shouldn't have said all that you know why.." Candice whispered,'Yeah she won't cause of ........" Sami whispered back,I..I..I forgot." Then She turned to Motoko and said,"I'm sorry it's your life you can do what you want me,Candice and Mina will just back you up on your choices." Motoko said,"It is okay.You should try to help me on the choices i make . But with this I have made up my mind. " They were walking by an alley and a boy with blond hair came out of no where. He crashed into Motoko.She looked at the boy's face he had his eyes closed and he was sorta familiar. Then she fainted,on the cold ground of the alley.She woke up in a bed room. Motoko looked over to Mina sitting near her.Mina said,"Oh...good you're awake."Motoko ask,"Where......Where is that boy? Mina said,"In the living room on the couch." Motoko said,"So you and Sami carried us both here." Mina said,"Not really, a suit of armor helped he said that he was the blond boy's brother. Motoko started to get up and get out of the bed. Mina said,"You're not suppose to move." Motoko got up and barely made it to the living room. Then She saw the boy still asleep.She walked over to him and set right near him. The boy woke up. She asked,"Are you okay?" The boy smiled and said,"Yeah...I think." She asked,"What is your name?" He said,"My name is Edward Elric,but you can call me Ed.What is yours?" She said,"Motoko. It is great to meet you. "Ed said,"You too..oh..This armor is my little brother Alphonse Elric,just call him Al." He said ,"Nice to meet you." Motoko said,"Nice to meet you,too.oh..and these are my friends Sami,Candice and Mina." They all said,"Hi." "Hey Ed..how can Al be your little brother..he's so much taller than you,"Motoko said. Ed looked at her and said,"Who are you calling a ant..so small you can't see it with a microscope!" "Brother..calm down..she didn't say that,"Al said. "Oh..I'm sorry,"Motoko said blushing. "Hey why are you doing that,"Ed asking pointing at her cheeks. "Oh..I'm sorry,"She said. "You're doing it again..,"He said. Sami started laughing. Motoko stood up.She slipped and crashed into Al. She got up to see if he was all right and saw he had no head. She fell backward right into Ed's arms. She ask,"W...W....What is he?" Ed said,"He is my little brother.or do you mean the no head?" She said,"I...I...I...I m-e-a-n t-h-e n-o h-e-a-d!!!" Ed said,"Well..my brother and I tried something..called human transmutation. When we did I lost my arm and Al lost his body. I attached his soul to that armor giving up my leg." Motoko said,"Al,I'M SO SO VERY SORRY.I feel so bad now.Can you forgive me Al?" Al said,"It is okay,It happens a lot." Sami blurts out,"Wow that must have taken a skilled alchemist to do that." Ed replied,"Well i wasn't that skilled." Al said,"Yes you were,brother." Motoko stood up and walk out side to clear my head with a walk. She heard a sound turn around with her eyes closed and hit something. Then Motoko heard ,Ed said,"Why did you do that?" She looked to see him laying on the ground with a punch mark on his face. She blushed and said,"Ed,I'm so so sorry.I didn't mean too........I mean I meant..I mean I thought you were .......SORRY!!" Ed stood up and said,"I bet I earned that.................I mean i did hit you earlier today." Motoko looked into his eyes and he looked into hers. Motoko quickly looked away. Then looked back at him.Ed ran to her and grabbed her hand. Ed said,"Come with me. I have something to show you." They ran together holding hands.
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Post by motoko on Jun 15, 2006 3:32:38 GMT -5
Chapter 2-Traveling Love
We ran to a small hill. Motoko said,"The stars are beautiful. How did you find this place?" She look at him.He is so sweet,and cute and..and I think i like him. He looked at her. She looked at the sky again and She saw something. It was white ...It was a snow flake. She looked and saw more. Motoko got up and started spinning. She thought she could here him whisper,"She's so beautiful." He walked over to her and looked into her dark brown eyes and once again they were locked into a gaze. Ed grabbed her by the hands. He leaned toward her face and softly kissed her lips. He pulled back and looked back at her eyes.She was shocked then smiled. Then she started shaking he set his jacket on my shoulders.Motoko looked over at him and set her head on his shoulders. They set there not moving for hours. Then Motoko fell asleep. She woke up to see she was at Sami's house again. Motoko looked beside her to Ed there sitting in a chair asleep. She got up and throw some covers over his shoulders,and slipped out of the room. Motoko went her backpack and looked for her house keys. Motoko grabbed them and ran to her house. She opened the door and walked in changed her clothes. She looked around and walked into her room to see her mom setting in her room. She looked at Motoko and said,"I heard what happened but,who is this boy I saw you with last night?" Motoko looked at her and said," His name is Edward Elric.He is a state alchemist." She said,"Oh...Well I think this is nice you have a boyfriend, who likes alchemy. I approve." Motoko stood there blushing. She said,"Thank you mom,but ......." Her mom said,'Invite him to dinner tonight to meet me,okay?" Motoko said,"Yes,mother." Her mom smiled at Motoko. Motoko ran back to Sami's house to see Ed sitting on the front porch. She walk up to him and tell him that he is invited to dinner with her and my mom. Ed said,"Okay,I'll be there." Motoko blushed and said,"Thank you." They were now at Motoko's house.Motoko's mom ask Ed so many questions Ed couldn't answer them all. After dinner was done her mom said,"Ed,Al, you are both welcome to stay as long as you like." Ed looks at Motoko. She was smiling. Then Ed said,"Sorry,I can't stay to long.I have to leave for central soon." Motoko got up and went running out the front door.Ed got up to follow her but was too far behind her. She ran and ran until she fell. Motoko got up. She look to see where her feet had taken her. She saw the stars and the soft snow on the ground. She remember last night when Ed kissed her. She slowly raise her hand to her lips.Then Motoko heard a sound and she turned around to see Ed. She look at him. Her eyes start to fill with tears. Motoko lift up her hand and slap him across the face. Then she cried,"You are a jerk.Why?Why do you have to go?" He looked her then started to hug her. She look into his eyes. He said," I need to find the Philosopher's Stone.I need to get my brother back to normal." Motoko replied through my tears,"You know how to make it right?" Ed replied,"No I don't yet." Motoko said all her tears were gone now,"I.....I....I.....I want to go with you." He looked at her ,and said,"sure.It would be fun,but you must do something for me." Motoko asked,"What?" He said,"You must write your mom." She laughed and said,"okay" Then she hugged him and kissed him on the cheek. She said,"Thank you,Ed!! I'll go pack." She ran home with Ed holding her hand. He ran by Motoko's mom. Her mom stopped him.She asked,"Is that pink lip stick on your face?"He said,"What,"and covered his cheek. Her mom just smiled and said,"I know what your going to do I don't mind,just keep her safe."Ed replied,"I will protect her with my life." Motoko packed. This is going to be the best time of my life,What about Sami,and Mina,and Candice. Motoko called,"Ed." He came in the room. She ask,"Ed,do you think 3 of my closest friends can come with us,Please?" He started scratching his head.Then he said ,"I guess." I hugged him tight and said,"Thank you." She ran to the phone and called her friends. They said,"We will meet you tomorrow at the train station 9:00pm." They all met at the station. Then they all got on the train. Motoko set next to Ed. She fell asleep with my head on Ed's shoulder. When Motoko woke up, they were at Central.
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Post by motoko on Jun 15, 2006 3:37:48 GMT -5
Chapter 3-State Alchemist
Candice,Mina,Sami,and Motoko when off to the library. The three months later they took the alchemist exam,and each of them became State Alchemist.They met everyone even sadly Roy Mustang.Ed thought the uniform skirts were too short so,he gave Motoko his jacket. She put it on over her state clothes Now they were are all state alchemist. Candice is the Ruby alchemist,Mina is the Emerald alchemist,Sami is the Sapphire alchemist.Motoko now the Diamond alchemist. Motoko said,"Okay,We need to split up.i'm with Ed,Candice, you and Al,Mina,and Sami you go together." They all when around town to find things on the Philosopher's Stone. Ed and Motoko were walking when all of the sudden A man came out of no where and slit Motoko in the back. She started to bleed. She looked at Ed then clapped her hands and grabbed her necklace. A sword was made. She yelled,"Who are you and why did you hit me?" He said,"I'm Scar,and I'll kill you and all other state Alchemist." He hit Motoko again. Motoko screamed. She took another hit from Scar this one knocked her on her back.He ran toward Ed and took over fighting him. Motoko pushed Ed down and was behind him.She took the plow Scar. She rose her sword and shoved it through Scar. Scar staggered and ran off.Ed picked Motoko up and ran to the hospital. She was bleeding. This is the end at least I die near Ed. Ed kept saying,'Don't you die,Motoko. Don't you Dare." Motoko looked at him,and closed my eyes.She could still hear him screaming at her. Ed was running to the hospital.It started to rain.He ran faster. Soon Al,Sami,Candice,Mina found him.Al carried Ed,and Motoko to the hospital.They set her in one bed and Ed in the one next to her. Motoko woke up to see Ed laying there next to her.He is so...so...so..sweet... She smiled at him. He looked over and said,"You awake I thought I was going to lose you." Motoko looked at him and said,'I was afraid to be away from you." Motoko smiled then looked away from him and picked up the ringing phone.She suddenly dropped the phone and started crying. "Motoko what's wrong,"Ed asked standing up.
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Post by motoko on Jun 15, 2006 4:00:38 GMT -5
Chapter 4-Memories are Treasures
Motoko said,"Mother..she's...she's dead." He ran over to her as she cried.He wrapped his arms around her and she said,"Scar...he...he did it..." He looked at her,and said,"Now,We have another reason to kill him." The doctor came in smiling,"Um..You shouldn't do that it could hurt her." She walked over to Ed,and said,'You still shouldn't be out of bed.We need you both to be healthy." Motoko looked at her and said,"What?' She said,"The state needs you in good health." She walked out the room. A woman in black said,"You almost slipped up,Envy." The doctor transformed and said,"Sorry Lust,it is hard..but now we know Fullmetal's weakness,his girlfriend." They walked out in nurse clothes.Outside there was a fat guy he said,"Next time can I eat one." Lust said,"No Glutnney." Motoko looked at Ed,and said,"I wanna leave this place.." She got up and fell back in the bed. She said,"I hate hospitals." Ed shook his head. Motoko got up and this time walked over to look out the window. She opened it and said,"I'm going to jump." Ed said,'No" He grabbed Motoko's hand and walked her out the hospital. A doctor said,"Call me if you have any problems." They walked to the central station. Ed said,"We are going to Motoko's home town." At the station they saw Sami,Al,Mina,and Candice. They got on the train and stopped at Motoko's home.
Al ran off for a little while. He came back. Motoko looked over to see Al holding something in a blanket.He handed it to her. She moved the cover to see her cat. Al said,"I saw it near your bed.It was meowing and came to me." Motoko said,"Thank you ,Al.This is my cat." She smiled holding tears. She remembered A boy with short blond hair,he handed her the kitten and said,"Motoko keep this cat okay it is a present for you. It is for our friendship. "okay,"She said,"okay I'll miss you." Ed said,"Motoko...you there?" She wiped her yes and said,"Yes. A close friend gave me this cat. I can't remember his name though. This cat is named Kouyuu," She said,"It means love and friendship." She walked into the house and into her room. She grabbed the photo albums. She walked out of the house trying not to cry,but she couldn't keep the tears much longer and dropped to her knees and cried. She felt like she was never going to stop. Ed walked over to her and put his arms around her. She stopped crying and looked at him. He's eyes where watery,and said,"Motoko,I know what it feels like." Motoko said,"You don't know how......." Motoko stopped and ran off. Ed ran after her.
Motoko ran until she was at the start of the woods there was a swing. She set down and opened the photo albums. She looked at the first page, and stuttered words,"Father ,Mother ,Trisha ,Emile,and Greogery.Your..all...gone.Why..Why..did you all die and leave me? Ed still has a brother.Sami has her whole family.Mina has her dad and little sister and big brother.Candice has a family too.I'm left all alone." A voice said,"No you aren't I'm here." She turned to see Ed standing there. Motoko said,"Ed...did you hear all that." He shook his head. She said,"You did..." The cat got up and started rubbing all over him. Motoko smiled then stood up and and started walking toward him. She clapped her hands and grabbed her necklace. "Now tell me who you are..,"Motoko said.
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Post by motoko on Jun 15, 2006 5:00:02 GMT -5
Chapter 5-Humanculie
Motoko asked,"Who are you?" He said,"I'm Ed." She said,"No you aren't." He said,"Fine.You caught me." He transformed into another person. He said,"I'm Envy." Motoko said,"Your...a...a..a...Humanculus.." He said,"yep.I had told you both to stay healthy." Motoko said,"You were the doctor." She backed up to feel something sharp in her back. She looked back to see another one behind her with its hands out stretched. Motoko fell face forward. She was still awake and started to stand up.Then A huge on said,"Can I eat her Lust."He ask to the girl with the stretchable hands. She said,"No just knock her out." He put his hands together,and hit Motoko in the back of the head. Motoko suddenly closed her eyes. Lust said,"Glutnney carry her,but if you so much as lick her I'll slit your tongue. Motoko woke up. She was tied to a pole with chains. Something inside was of her She could feel it moving. She looked behind her to see a girl with black hair. She looked like her mind was somewhere else.Lust walked up to Motoko and grabbed her attention .She said,"You see that girl her name is Kirrau.Her mind is inside you.She can learn your deeps secrets,your dreams,anything." Motoko could feel her body going numb.What was happening?I'm I dieing I thought.What about Ed if he comes to save me,no Motoko look at herself. Then she looked up and she was in a room it is on fire. She had no voice. She saw her father, her sisters and her brother. Her father is coming toward her and the boards on the house cave-in under him. Motoko ran to her sister's room and saw Emile on the ground and she wasn't breathing. Motoko ran out of the room and saw her brother in his carriage still breathing. She grabbed him. Then Motoko saw fire fighters rush in and get out with her and her brother. The ambulance took her brother and left.Motoko's mom held Motoko in her arms. As they watched their house burn down. Motoko looked around to see the humanculie again. She stuttered,"What was that?" Lust said,"Kirrau did that." Motoko looked at her. She felt a pain in her back. Motoko turned to see Kirrau's hands in her back.Is she going inside of me? Motoko looked back at Lust. She said,"Lust,What do you want with me?" Lust said,"I want to make you suffer,and to get Fullmetal by using you." Motoko said,"He won't come for me." She said,"He won't find you either. He will find Envy."
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Post by motoko on Jun 15, 2006 5:15:04 GMT -5
Chapter 6-Hawkeye and Mustang
Motoko started,"I..." and she was completely numb. She couldn't move. Motoko tried to move but was still on the pole. She saw Ed,or did she? Motoko screamed,"Edward." He ran to her,and tried to take off the chains.I'm not really doing this it is Kirrau. A voice said,"your right it is me I'm inside you. I wanted to have said,'run away Ed.this is a trap." but i couldn't. I could feel my body completely going dead. Now the only thing I could hear was that voice. "Get..out of my head,"I said. "I want to make you suffer...human." I had some control of my mind.But only to talk. I said,"Ed hurry..get away..there's something..controling my body." He said,"No Motoko." Ed now he had the chains off Motoko. Her hands she couldn't control any of her body. She grabbed his neck. Motoko said,"Please...don't let her do this...kill me if you must..." Motoko let go of his neck and started using alchemy. "I'll get rid of you..,"I said. Motoko forced Kirrau out of her body. She fell to the floor. Motoko looked to see the humanculie run away.Then she look over to see Ed breathing hard. He ran over to Motoko. He looked down at Motoko and lifted her up. She looked at him,and open her mouth to say something. He put his lips on hers. They were locked in a kiss. This isn't the right time for this..but.. He stopped to see her reaction. Motoko looked at him with her eyes wide. She said,"I...I...I...I...." He put his finger over her mouth and ran into another room. He said,"Someone is here." Then the door open and there was Roy Mustang And Riza Hawkeye. Motoko stood up and saluted then fell on Ed. Hawkeye ran over and ask,"What happened here Ed?" He set there.She said,'Now Edward!!" Ed said,"Humanculie." Roy's eyes widened. He said,"Let's take her to the hospital." Ed picked me up and carried me. Motoko looked up to Ed and said,"I'm fine really..I fine." She set her head against his chest and fell asleep in his arms.
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