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Post by Damian on Jun 13, 2006 10:22:47 GMT -5
This is a story about Pokemon I'm writing. You don't have to read it if you don't wanna, but if you do PM me what you thought of it. Right now it's only the Prologue.
PROLOGUE
"I'm going to miss you...."Damian's mother said "My little boy......is all grown-up and going on an adventure..." "I'll be okay mom." Damian said as he picked up his bagpack and flung it over his shoulder "I've got Eevee and Treeko with me." His mother pulled him to her and hugged him very tight. "Mom..." Damian said "I love you." Without another word Damian left his small house and began his big adventure.
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Post by Damian on Jun 13, 2006 10:23:27 GMT -5
(I got chapter one up now.)
Chapter 1: The Begining
Damian was walking on a route close to his home in Oaktown. Mom will be so happy to see me! thought Damian. He kept walking untill he found himself in Oaktown once again. "Well this place pretty-much looks the same." he said "I'm suprised I even remember my own address!" "271, 272, and 273." he said "Well, here I am..." He opened the door and went inside. "Mom!" he called out "Mom, you here?!" "Could it be?" he heard a vioce from upstairs. "Damian!" his mother yelled as she ran up to him and gave him a huge hug. "My how you've grown!" she said "You're as tall as an Ursaring!" "So how have ypu been?" she asked him" Fine I would guess?" Damian nodded "All that extra food you packed really helped at the end!" "So how have your Pokemon been?" she asked "Have they been growing too?" "Yeah." Damian said as he was about to take a Pokeball from his belt. "No." his mother said "I want to see your Pokemon in action." Damian showed a confused expression "Huh?" "I mean I want to see your Pokemon in battle." she said "So what do ya say?" "I never back down from a challenge!" Damian yelled " You're on!" He and his mother walked out to the battle arena in the town square. "Okay, here I go!" his mother yelled as she threw a Pokeball up in the air. The Pokeball released a Persian. "Per Persian!" Persian yelled. "Okay, my turn go!" he yelled as he also threw a Pokeball up in the air. His Pokeball released a Vaporeon. "Poreon!" Vaporeon yelled. "Was that that cute little Eevee you used to have?" she asked "But don't think I'll go easy on it!" "Now here we go! Persian Slash attack!" his mother yelled. "Dodge and use bubble beam Vaporeon!" Damian yelled. Vaporeon dodged out of the way of the Slash attack, and sent out a bubble beam attck to the side of Persian. "Perow!!" it yelled fro the hit. The direct hit did serious damage to the Persian. "Go Persin, Crunch attack!" his mother yelled as Persian ran towards Vaporeon jaws agape. "Vaporeon, face it and use Hydro-Pump!' Damian yelled. Vaporeon faced Persian and sent out a powerfull stream of water, knocking Persian back into a tree. "Per...Sian.." it said as it tried to stand up, but fell down again. "It's okay Persian, return." his mother said as she threw the Pokeball out at Persian, and it was returned. "Now go, Miltank!" his mother yelled as she threw out a Pokeball that revealed a Miltank. "Mil Miltank!" it said as it revealed itself. "Go vaporeon, bubble beam!" Damian yelled as Vaporeon sent out another bubble-beam attack. "Miltank, use Reflect!" Damian's mother yelled. Miltank made a yellow ball cover in it from the attack. The bubbles bounced off the ball. "Now go Vaporeon! Hydro-Pump!" he yelled. Vaporeon sent out another powerfull stream of water, braking through the shield. "Now, Miltank use Thunder on that stream of water!" she yelled. Miltank made a ball of lightning, and pressed it against the stream of water. The electricity traveled up the water, electricuteing Vaporeon. Vaporeon fell out of HP. (Next chapter-Chapter 2: In The Heat Of Battle.)
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Post by Damian on Jun 13, 2006 10:24:42 GMT -5
Chapter 2: In The Heat Of Battle
"Vaporeon! No!" Damian yelled as he looked at his Vaporeon out of HP. "Come on back, you did good." he said as he threw a Pokeball out to withdraw Vaporeon. "Now you're gonna get it mom!" He yelled "Go Raichu!" Damian threw out a Pokeball and a Raichu emerged. "Rai Raichu Rai!" Raichu yelled. "Aww, what a cutie pie!" Damians mother said putting her hands to her cheeks, admireing Raichu. "Yeah, you'll think this is cute! Go use Thunder!" Damian yelled out at his mother, then at Raichu. "Rai-CHU!" Raichu yelled at electricity flowed from it fast, and straight at Miltank. "Miltank!" it yelled as it was hit directly by the Thunder attack. "Now go! Rollout!" his mother yelled. Miltank went into a charge, then toppled over, head first, into a rolling charge. "Raichu, use Agility!" Damian yelled. Raichu made a quick dodge to the left. "Now use Agility again combined with a Thunder attack!" Damian yelled agin. Miltank was charging again with a Rollout attack, but this time it was stronger than before. Raichu charged right back. Raichu looked like a yellow comet, heading straight for Miltank, then BOOM! Raichu was flung back and so was Miltank. Raichu tried to stand up, but fell agian. "Oh no.." his mother said, withdrawing Miltank. "Raichu, you did great." he said returning Raichu. "Now go Politoed!" his mother yelled throwing a Pokeball that released a Politoed. "Poli!" it yelled. "Go Houndoom!" Damian yelled, throwing a Pokeball that released his Houndoom. Houndoom simply snorted at Politoed. "You didn't think on this one!" his mother said "Politoed has water attacks, while Hounddom is a fire type!" "We like to live a litle, right Houndoom?" Daimian said looking at Houndoom. "Houn! Houndoom!" it yelled. "Politoed, Hydro-Pump!" his mother yelled. "Houndoom, charge into it using Take-Down!" Damian yelled at Houndoom. Houndoom made a powerfull charge right into the Hydro-Pump. Houndoom winced from the water, and he started to get pushed back. "Come on Houdoom! You can do it! Don't give up!" Damian yelled. Houndoom looked straight ahead and took a step forward. "Uh oh.." his mom said. Houndoom took another step, then another. Houndoom then started to charge through the water, hitting Politoed hard. "Yes!" Damian yelled "Now Crunch!" Houndoom went into a run, and jumped in the air. He then dived onto Politoed with a crushing bite. "Poli!" it yelled as it was bitten. "Now Politoed Hydro-Pump!" his mother yelled. Politoed let out another Hydro-Pump attack. "Now Houndoom, use Hyper-Beam!" Damian yelled. Houndoom's Hyper-Beam attack countered Politoed's Hydro-Pump attack. They kept coliding with each other, gaining power. Then, the two blasts were soon over powered by each other, making an explosion. When all smoke cleared, Houndoom and Politoed were out of HP. "You did a great job Politoed!" his mother yelled with a smile on her face, as she withdrew Politoed. "Same to you Houndoom." Damian siad withdrawing Houndoom." "Go Zangoose!" his mother yelled as her thrown Pokeball revealed a Zangoose. "Cool Zangoose." Damian said as he threw a Pokeball in the air "Now go Grovyle!" The trown Pokeball revealed a Grovyle. "Look at little treeko!" his mother said "All grown-up just like you Damian!" "Grovyle, Quick Attack!" Damian yelled. Grovyle Started to run, then went into a Quick Attack. "Zangoose dodge it!" his mother yelled as Zangoose dodged out of the Quick Attack's way. "Again Grovyle!" Damian yelled. Grovyle made a very quick turn and went back into a Quick Attack. "Zangoose, walk a few paces to the left!" his mother yelled "And jump up before the attack hits you!" Zangoose waited for the attack, then jumped up. When Zangoose jumped, it sent Grovyle plowing into a tree. "Grov..yle." it said, but shook the pain off. "Now Grovyle, take your chance and use Leaf Blade!" Damian yelled. While Zangoose was still in the air, Grovyle made an uppercut with his Leaf Blade attack. "Counter it with Crush claw!" his mother yelled. Zangoose's claws started to glow, and he countered the Lef Blade with the Crush Claw. Both were thrown back, but were up again in no time. "Zangoose, Tackle attack!" his mother yelled as Zangoose went into a charge. "Wait for it Grovyle!" Damian yelled. Grovyle waited for Zangoose's attack. "Now use Pound!" Damian yelled. Grovyle used the long leaf on his head to knock Zangoose up into the air. "Now Grovyle! Leaf Blade!" Damian yelled to Grovyle. Grovyle did another uppercut in the air with Leaf Blade, but this time it didn't miss Zangoose. The blow hit Zangoose hard, plowing him into the ground. Grovyle flipped back and landed on his feet "Grovyle." "We won!" Damian said "We won, we won!" "That was a great battle!" his mother yelled returning Zangoose. "I can drive us to a Pokemon Center to heal our Pokemon "C'mon Damian!" "Ok" he said to his mother as he withdrew Grovyle and ran back to his house, and into his mother's car. (Next Chapter=Chapter 3: An Old Friend.)
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Post by Damian on Jun 14, 2006 22:26:35 GMT -5
Chapter 3: An Old Friend
Damian pulled up with his mother at the Pokemon Center. They got oyut of the car and walked inside. Damian's mother walked up to the front desk and talked to Nurse Joy. His mother then walked up to him. "Nurse Joy needs your PokeBalls." she said to him. "Ok.." he replied giving his mother the PokeBalls off his belt. His mother walked back up to the counter to speak with Nurse Joy. "She said it will take about an hour to heal all of our Pokemon." she said "I'm going to go shopping while we wait." "You stay here and call me on the phone over there when they're done." his mother said as she walked out the door. Damian yawned awaiting for the Pokemon to be finished healing. He then looked up and saw a girl looking at a magazine. She sure looks formiliar.. He thought to himself. He stopped and started to look at a magazine, but he was to distracted by thinking of that girl. I know I've seen her before.. he thought But where??? He looked at her again and then it hit him Jenny! Damian stood up and walked over to Jenny. "Hi Jenny!" he said "It's me, Damain!" "Damian?!" Jenny echoed back at him "Hi Damian!" She stood up and gave him a hug "How have you been?! It's been so long!" "I've been good." Damian said blushing heavily "It's been six years I know." She let go of him and sat down. "So how have your Pokemon been?" Jenny asked him. "They've been growing." he replied "Yours?" "Mine have been growing too." she said "They are in the healing room now." "So are mine, and my mother's." he said. "You battled your mom?" Jenny asked "Did you win?" "Yeah!" he said "We mopped the floor with them! No sweat!" "How many of your Pokemon fainted?!" Jenny said with a sarcastic look. "Umm.....three.." he said. "And how many Pokemon do you train?" Jenny said still looking sarcasticly. "Um....four." Damian replied. Soon they had been talking for almost an hour, when a Chansey walked up. It had a little nurse's hat and aprin. "Chansey!" the Chansey said handing two trays to Damian and one tray to Jenny. "I guess our Pokemon are healed." he said smileing. "Yeah, guess so." Jenny said smileing back. "Hey Jenny, you wanna have a battle?!" Damian asked standing up. "Sure!" said Jenny also standing up. With that the two ran outside, PokeBalls hanging from their belts once again. (Next Chapter=Chapter 4:A Friendly Fight)
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Post by Damian on Jun 15, 2006 5:34:07 GMT -5
Chapter 4: A Friendly Fight
Damian walked with Jenny out to a field. "How bout' we battle two on two?" asked Jenny taking a PokeBall from her belt. "Sure, why not?" asked Damian also taking two Pokeballs from his belt. He threw th PokeBalls in the air to reveal Vaporeon and Raichu. Jenny threw her two PokeBalls in the air to reval Espeon and Furret. "Go Furret, Take Down on Raichu. Espeon, use Psychic on Vaporeon!" "Raichu dodge it with agility. Vaporeon, Counter that Psychic with Hydro-Pump!" Raichu sped past the Take-Down quickly. Vaporeon held off the Psychic waves with a heavy steam of water. "Now Raichu, use Thunder! Vaporeon use Agility!" Damian yelled. "Furret use Rollout. Espeon, keep chasing Vaporeon with Psychic!" Jenny yelled. Raichu shot out a lighting bolt straight at Furret. Furret quickly went into a head-first roll, and the Thunder attack slid off. Furret went at high speed towards Raichu, and hit him hard. "Raichu Rai!" it said as it was hit. On the other hand, Vaporeon was being chased down by a Psychic attack. "Vaporeon, stop for a minute and then jump to your left, and use Hydro-Pump! Raichu, don't give up! Use Take Down combined with Thunder!" Damian yelled. Raichu stood up and went into a full charge right at the spinning Furret. He then electrafied himself. He knew exactly what to do, because Damian had done this strategy with him many times. Raichu looked like a Golden Comet, heading straight for a brown, striped one. The two colided and Furret was flown back. Raichu stood proudly, and puffed out his chest. Furret lay knocked out. In the meentime, Vaporeon had been running from a Psychic attack. He stopped in his tracks, and waited for it. When the attack got close enough, he jumped to his left and shot out a Hydro-Pump attack. Espeon was hit and was pushed back. "Furret, return." Jenny said as she threw out Furret's PokeBall. Furret was withdrawn, and Jenny threw out another PokeBall to reveal Swellow. "Espeon use Psychic again on Vaporeon, Swellow use Steel Wing on Raichu!" Jenny Yelled. "Vaporeon, dodge it, Raichu, counter it with an electrafied Take-Down!" Damian yelled. Vaporeon ran from the Psychic attack, but slipped in a rock on the ground. He was flown forward, and hit heavily be he Psychic attack. Vaporeon fell to the ground. "Por...eon.." he uttered weakly trying to stand up. His effort failed as hge collapsed again. "Come on back Vaporeon!" said Damian as he threw out a PokeBall that with drew Vaporeon. (Next Chapter=Chapter 4: Are We Battleing As Friends, Or As Rivals?)
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